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Nov. 24 Wink and Nod

Wink and Nod So this is older and wiser: Unembarrassed by both dearth and surfeit— cats and cars and cans stacked against the next calamity. Unencumbered by raw desire, ruinous dreams, by all the...

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Re: Nov. 24 Wink and Nod

Ah, yes.  All those boogeymen, but also Santa, gone by the wayside.  I enjoyed this a lot.  I'm sure my age helps.  My personal favorite part (which says so much):Unencumbered by raw desire,...

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much enjoyed able to tolerate ambiguity! I'd love to see this add just a pinch more attitude, which wouldn't take much--my squirmy brain did it, as I read. eg. Getting the joke (finally) and not...

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Re: Nov. 24 Wink and Nod

Really wonderful! Love this. So this is older and wiser: Unembarrassed by both dearth and surfeit— cats and cars and cans stacked against the next calamity. Just brilliant. . . so this is older and...

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Re: Nov. 24 Wink and Nod

Maybe needs a little dearth image in the first stanza. One to fiddle with.

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Yeah, a dearth image in S1 would be cool, but honestly, it's a very good poem even without that, every stanza, a little "click!"

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I like it, too, especially the last two stanzas. I think an image would give it some oomph.

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Re: Nov. 24 Wink and Nod

I esp. like S1 and the penultimate S. All those stacked cans and cats. :-)

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love the cats cars and cans I am pretty sure anyone can imagine dearth , but love these odd images of surfeit

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